well, not as good as i wish it was, but i really tried to make this one look good. i was inspired by an image on the science channel, from the upcoming special 'through the wormhole with morgan freeman' [link] .
I like it but there is one thing that sticks out. The text isn't very well placed. A bit distracting. Try to put it somewhere where there isn't a lot going on so it doesn't interrupt the viewing.
Overall good job. A bit bright though
The text is no longer in the way of important aspects of the piece.